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Saturday, September 10, 2011

Project #4-C4C #2 for Deena Martin:EDM 310 Class Blog

In reading Deena's Martin's C4C #1, her reaction was short, but not very detailed. I would have to go to the original source (Taylor Lane's Post) to get a better idea of what he stated if it was available. It is important to point out specific ideas or statements when summarizing or reacting to another's writing; if perhaps Deena had quoted the 'descriptive and informative words' she alluded to in Taylor's writing, I would have gotten a deeper understanding of his meaning.
Since we are not in a group setting other than online, detail is what we depend on to share ideas and responses to others' insights and reactions. I think a few more details in Deena's C4C comments will better showcase her feelings, thoughts and opinions. She has a good overall understanding of classmates' comments, but could benefit from a more detailed interview of the material.

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